Could you check my english grammar please?

Feeling guilty for murdering the Calormenes, Tirian and Jewel decide to give themselves up to the justice of Aslan and asks the armed Calormenes to bring them the Aslan. However, there is no Aslan where they were taken to, only Ape. Ape claims he is the only one Aslan will ever talk to; the Narnains and the Caolormenes believed this absurd claim so they followed whatever they commanded. Ironically, Ape dishonors the great Aslan and the cruel Tash. After King Tirian sees that the Narnians believe these ridiculous claims, he becomes depressed and angry and tries to speak out against Ape, but is taken away by Ape's order.