Please rate my story.?

Hmm... 4 stars! The story seems a little bit similar to others... Morals? Maybe... Killing people doesn't make them happy? Lol. Just kidding. How about you can't always be happy with your actions, even though you've convinced yourself of it? And to add to the last sentence, make it where you describe his eternal life in the place he knows is not heaven? Twist it around a bit at the end! :)